My grandma's hands

This week's writing task was a free-verse poem about"my grandma's hands". We practised using semi-colons, a range of sentence lengths and using better vocabulary.Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to about my great grandma because he was someone very special in my family but I wish I could spend more time with her.

My great grandma's hands by Malachi  

My great grandma's hands;

are wrinkly,cold and weak pillows;

Her back, a stiff ladder;

Her legs, fast twigs.

Her laugh is a quiet chuckle

Her favourite colour is yellow/golden and white which is the colour of heaven.

Lying 

peacefully and quiet

my great grandma 

is wrapped in wood.

Moment of awesome

 

One of the most awesomeness this I did is when I rode the farefall

with my cousin's and me.When I got all the to the top and dropped I felt like

I was flying then I liked to my cousins they were closing their eyes and screaming.  

About me update

 My name is Malachi. I am a year 7 at Ruapotaka school and my teacher is Mr Nevalangi.

I am a proud Samoan with three brothers and two sisters.My mum,dad,nana and papa are all from Samoa and speak fluent Samoan. I kind of speak Samoan but not that much.  

Some of my Interests are eating shrimp because it is my favourite food especially when it’s fried. I also like to eat butter chicken. My favourite restaurant/fast food place is Burger King.I play games like among us, minecraft,krunker and other games.I also like to support the rabbitoh's by watching their games.

Some of the hobbies I like to do is to play soccer,touch,baseball and other things like going to the pools/beach,spending time with family.

bingo

 

On our latest cyber smart session with Mr Goodwin and Mr Fergersin. We did a bingo so for example for a drawing you put a drawing at you did or on your blog but your not aloud to search it up on google.