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Thursday, May 20, 2021

My grandma's hands

This week's writing task was a free-verse poem about"my grandma's hands". We practised using semi-colons, a range of sentence lengths and using better vocabulary.Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to about my great grandma because he was someone very special in my family but I wish I could spend more time with her.

My great grandma's hands by Malachi  

My great grandma's hands;

are wrinkly,cold and weak pillows;

Her back, a stiff ladder;

Her legs, fast twigs.

Her laugh is a quiet chuckle

Her favourite colour is yellow/golden and white which is the colour of heaven.

Lying 

peacefully and quiet

my great grandma 

is wrapped in wood.



2 comments:

  1. This is a nice poem about your great grandma malachi.Sorry she past away.How was she when you were with her?Have a good day Buddy!

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  2. You have provided a lovely description of your nan, Malachi.
    Mr N

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