I wore my mask to protect myself and others from getting covid, however, it wasn't big enough to hide the smile on my face while I was walking through the school gates and towards my classroom.
As soon as I saw my friends and my teacher, I was filled with excitement and happiness. I looked around my classroom and it felt like I hadn't been to school in a year.
Yesterday was better than all of the days in lockdown combined because I got away from my siblings for a couple of hours and it felt nice to play with different people other than my family.
While I was playing on the vortex with my friends I realized that my body felt sick after a few spins because I haven't been on it for months.
Hi Malachi
ReplyDeleteThis is a great summary of your return to school. You have described some moments well enough to show excitement and joy from your day, with a bit of humour (family). I like the vortex description, that paints a vivid picture.
I edited your piece for accurate SPG. I also separated your different ideas into paragraphs. You should try using a range of short and long sentences to really capture your reader's attention.
Solid effort!
Mr N