I used to, But now poem

 

Today for writing I did a poem about I used to, But now and we had to do 10 ideas for the poem.The poem is basically is about what you used to do things but now you have changed, and I wrote this poem all by myself.

My week last week

On Monday and Tuesday last week most of my family was sick.Then on Wednesday we packed our things for Hamilton and also we cleaned the house before we went to Hamilton.On the way to Hamilton  

Here we are in car heading to Hamilton and we are in mount wellington, and also if anyone is wondering what I am eating I am eat a little bit of jerky I thought that I was going to like it but then in the end I hated it because it tasted like blood.(maybe because my gum was bleeding).

Here we are in Hamilton in our air BNB after one of our serves.Funny story why there's so many people in our house, so we invited 8 or 7 people to our house then out of no where people just started to rush in and we ended up with 40 persons in our house.I'm sorry that the picture is upside down but that is the way that my mum took the photo.

This was also on the last day we got to stay in Hamilton before we had to come back in Auckland.

Cybersmart Writing Session: What If?

 

2 weeks ago our writing/cybersmart session was a fun and silly one. Writing can be fun and silly, but things that shouldn't be silly in our writing includes accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar - thanks for lesson and reminder, Mr Goodwin! 

Over the next few days, Room 7 will also be writing their own "What if" experiences. Please keep an eye out for their pieces of writing - enjoy! 

My grandma's hands

This week's writing task was a free-verse poem about"my grandma's hands". We practised using semi-colons, a range of sentence lengths and using better vocabulary.Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to about my great grandma because he was someone very special in my family but I wish I could spend more time with her.

My great grandma's hands by Malachi  

My great grandma's hands;

are wrinkly,cold and weak pillows;

Her back, a stiff ladder;

Her legs, fast twigs.

Her laugh is a quiet chuckle

Her favourite colour is yellow/golden and white which is the colour of heaven.

Lying 

peacefully and quiet

my great grandma 

is wrapped in wood.

Moment of awesome

 

One of the most awesomeness this I did is when I rode the farefall

with my cousin's and me.When I got all the to the top and dropped I felt like

I was flying then I liked to my cousins they were closing their eyes and screaming.  

About me update

 My name is Malachi. I am a year 7 at Ruapotaka school and my teacher is Mr Nevalangi.

I am a proud Samoan with three brothers and two sisters.My mum,dad,nana and papa are all from Samoa and speak fluent Samoan. I kind of speak Samoan but not that much.  

Some of my Interests are eating shrimp because it is my favourite food especially when it’s fried. I also like to eat butter chicken. My favourite restaurant/fast food place is Burger King.I play games like among us, minecraft,krunker and other games.I also like to support the rabbitoh's by watching their games.

Some of the hobbies I like to do is to play soccer,touch,baseball and other things like going to the pools/beach,spending time with family.

bingo

 

On our latest cyber smart session with Mr Goodwin and Mr Fergersin. We did a bingo so for example for a drawing you put a drawing at you did or on your blog but your not aloud to search it up on google.